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sixshot (30)in #photography • 7 years ago
RE: Downtown Bangor, Maine - Monochrome CANON Shoot
thank you!
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Deltanis / Where poetry and fantasy worldbuilding collide ~
Thank you=)
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Steemit Collaborative Poetry Experiment 🌈
*To which he gazed upon, with awestruck eyes, *And gave unto you the first decree, a song by four beatles, let it be. Awesome idea good sir, may the glory continue ~
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Waveform... a freeverse to drift off to sleep...
I'd be honored, I shall indulge when I can!
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sixshot (30)in #digibyte • 7 years ago
RE: DigiByte (DGB): A Fractal Could be in Play!!
This is in no way relevant to this article, get out of here with that spam
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sixshot (30)in #poem • 7 years ago
RE: Untitled Sestina (original)
I stumbled upon your work while looking at other people's sestinas. I really like how you put the end words together, its not easy! Curious on your thoughts on mine
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Waveform... a freeverse to drift off to sleep...
Humbly appreciated good sir! Thank you for the glorious feedback=)
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sixshot (30)in #poem • 7 years ago
RE: He is the one who remembers himself
I'm a bit confused on the picture's relevance to the poem lol
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Last Desserts
Thank you good sir!
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sixshot (30)in #newlife • 7 years ago
RE: I feel indebted
A very thoughtful poem, I think it grows more powerful as it progresses. That being said, the first line I think could be made stronger to provide precedence for the final two…
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sixshot (30)in #poem • 7 years ago
RE: Tranquil twilight
I love how you tie the title in at the end. One line that possibly confused me was "calmly controlled the situation." Do you mean; "Calm... controlled the situation," ??…
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Warm is My Heart
I enjoy your free verse, and your flow of thoughts and emotions. For me the ending can be stronger though, "I think need a help" could be altered to provide a more powerful…
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sixshot (30)in #creativewriting • 7 years ago
RE: Songwriting : Wrong Time
I like the ending refrain, it flows with passion. I like that you write in a lyrical sense, I enjoy that style as well. I think you may enjoy this=)
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sixshot (30)in #writing • 7 years ago
RE: JUST THOUGHTS......
This is very well put together and quite inspiring! Well done! I would love your feedback on one of my recent poems
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sixshot (30)in #poem • 7 years ago
RE: A Trip
I like where you're going with this, I feel it could be made stronger with some grammar and punctuation! Instead of running thoughts, add dramatic pause with more commas and…
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Random Thoughts of Poetry ✍️ Untitled Poems#16
I like the passion again, a few thoughts on phrasing which catch my eye... Instead of "Time flies in every laughter and Tears," perhaps "Time flies in every laughter, and…
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sixshot (30)in #contest • 7 years ago
RE: *CONTEST CLOSED - WIN SBD - GUESS THE FILM #44 - Haiku Contest
The Truth About Jane?
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sixshot (30)in #poem • 7 years ago
RE: Alesia
Thank you, alas, she is the daughter of one of my characters in the book I am writing=)
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: My Lyrics That Became a Poem
I usually am not a fan of poems that rhyme, but I liked the flow you had here. I can definitely see the song essence in it, well done! I would love some feedback on my poem!
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sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago
RE: Poem / Nothing, just Nothing
I enjoyed your poem, however I felt the rhyming takes away from it. At least from my perspective! The end rhymes felt forced, and I feel if you broke the rhyme scheme your…
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