PostsCommentsPayoutsnoah.morris (29)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Black Crow-Chapter 1Not trying to be mean or anything like that, but you may want to work on refining your writing. Maybe try to rewrite this using proper grammar?noah.morris (29)in #story • 8 years agoRE: ALARM CLOCK DAWN (An Original Novel - Part 1)Well written, and honestly realistic, going to read part 2 and wait for the rest!