PostsCommentsPayoutsenalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: deleteThanks for reading.🤗enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: deleteThanks for your kind words and stopping by.enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #132 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize AnnouncementMy Entry👇🙈enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: deleteThanks for reading and have nice day😊.enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Football crazy.The pacing moves quickly, building tension and then releasing it with the "play" reveal and laughter. The story flows well with natural dialogue.enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Breathe. Believe. Be.The story captures the feeling of writer's block very well. The description of the frustration, desperation, and hopelessness as the deadline approaches is vivid. The advice from…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #132 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize AnnouncementThanks you for mention me in, and Congratulations to @kemmyb, @kei2, @smc.arike.oba!enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Graveyard RecipesWow, this story's got the feels, you know? It's all about love, loss, and dealing with that heavy grief stuff. Sisi's love for her hubby, Sam, and how she's holding onto his…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Strangling TiesDaniel is a complex character - he seeks his parents' approval but also needs to detach to find himself.enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: In the forest.The theme of lost or unrequited love comes through strongly. The girl is heartbroken when abandoned by her lover, and even in death continues to long for love and connection.…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #131 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcementenalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Echoes of Rekindled BondsSarah's recollection of her suddenly dissolved friendship with Emma feels realistic and relatable. The metaphor of it fading "into the haze" rings true. The messages sent to each…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Old HouseThe setting of a dark, stormy night in a haunted house is atmospheric and helps build an eerie mood. Descriptions like "the wind howled like a banshee's cry" and the house…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Forever Together - Creative Nonfiction #44The descriptions of the spreading fire and smoke effectively build a vivid scene. Details like the smoke seeping under the door and the flames spreading towards the living room…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Rising Together— Unity Amidst Adversity.The theme of human connection and community in the face of adversity comes through strongly. I like how you highlights that the youths "could have just continued to play…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #131 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize AnnouncementCongratulations to all winners.😉🏆enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Thе Enigma of Eclipsia ManorI'm drawn into the rich atmosphere you've created through vivid details like the mist-covered woods, flickering candles, and creeping shadows. You balance mystery and suspense…enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: Civil unrest in town.It seems like a difficult and worrying situation, however I'm glad to pay attention that you and your fellow students have been capable of aid each different thru camaraderie and generosity.enalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: The Sound of Her VoiceThank you for your comment and have a nice dayenalaton (47)in The Ink Well • last yearRE: In Another LifeThe character development is a bit limited. Andrew is grieving and desperate, but not much else is revealed about his personality. Elisa and Anna could be more fully realized…