mgaft1 (66)in #writing • 7 years agoRE: Reading Charles Bukovski's story ( THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN IN TOWN)A great analysis. Yeah, maybe less drama and finger breaking would be better. And yeah, why wouldn't he be liking her? Young pretty chick and all the needed accessories. So…steemgoblin (56)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Original Poem, Don't Blame MeHi, Camnine, I am glad my piece impacted you. That being said, other than pointing out the typo, I don't remember asking for your critique and it's hardly fair for you to do so…mada (71)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Hitching through the rural USA? No matter what you believe, the bible might just save your life.Glad you liked my story. It's one of my favorites to tell the younger travelers who sometimes ask for advice before setting off on their own adventures. It is also what comes…mgaft1 (66)in #writing • 8 years agoRE: The Scarmaker (An original short story)hahah I like your interpretation of a breaker even better than what it is. Thank you. I think you made me blush with your reply. I'd like to warn you. I am very susceptible to flattery. Cheersmgaft1 (66)in #writing • 8 years agoRE: The Reset (An Original Short Story)Thank you! I think since I have a bunch of written crap on my hard drive I can as well get paid 4 it. Yes, Liz stepped into the unknown. In a Star Trek way, to "where no woman…mgaft1 (66)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Ups and downs (An Original Very Short Story)Thank you. This is so sweet of you. I imagined Franky being a very simple basic guy, who doesn't really know how to behave at the dinner table. That is to know which side of…