Agnes

in #100words8 years ago (edited)

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Her name is Agnes. Agnes once visited the place of her birth, the village, and was overcome by the brightest light she had ever experienced. Everyone had told her she had fallen asleep whilst sitting in a living room where she had grown up. She had always taken this experience for an extremely vivid dream, the dream had only lasted a short while. During this dream, in the light, a figure had appeared, it was a very comforting person she thought, somehow this dream stimulated a very blissful emotion in her. Shortly after this experience she begun to see figures that other people told her weren’t there but she was certain they were, and her memory became so perfect that all the people she knew began using her as an encyclopedia, as the source of facts for what had happened. Because of all this her dead husbands spirit didn’t surprise her when he appeared, some believed Agnes when she spoke of his visits.

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Thank you for your entry - great work!
Unfortunately you have been a little exuberant at 160 words plus! May I suggest a little editing may be needed! I know ... it is not an easy task but it makes you use your words to max effect!